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Another Poem by me Tuesday. 2.13.07 1:11 pm Morning As the sun rises ever morning, he is there watching The orange-yellow glow, filling his heart The joy he feels to know once again, A new day has begun He waits for what seems to be a life time Then, waking inside, he goes to wake her from her slumber Smiling he calls to her, in a soft, loving voice Slowly, she stirs and opens her sleepy eyes He brings her breakfast Gently sitting next to her as she eats They talk about their dreams and wishes They share many dreams and wishes together A few more years They will wed Only waiting to be sure they’re ready for a commitment His love for her cant be described in words They share many moments together And when they are apart, their thoughts are on each other, He can feel her watching over him He can feel her very heart beating, as though it were next to his own He finds himself constantly thinking about her And he knows she can feel his presents with her His aura reaches out to her Across any distance in space and time When he returns to her, his heart leaps with joy To once again be in her loving embrace To hold her for another night Until once again, the sun rises Written by Christopher J Empey Categories: Blog [t], Blogs [t], Poetry [t], Poems [t] 2 Comments. When he returns to her, his heart leaps with joy To once again be in her loving embrace To hold her for another night Until once again, the sun rises Thats my favorite stanza. » Dilated on 2007-02-13 01:49:05 I like the beginning because he is watching the sun, and yet he is like the sun, filled with orange glowing like his love. Also when he goes to wake her, he wakes her gently like the soft touch of the rays of the morning sun. Also the whole poem has a contains the rhythm of a diurnal cycle, rising and falling like the sun. I like it. » Zanzibar on 2007-02-13 02:20:54
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